Can you analyse my play please.
Thaqnk You

Game #4126253343: Hold'em NL (15/30) - 2007/05/18 - 02:27:12 (UK)
Table "2" Seat 1 is the button.
Hand History Converter

Seat 1: Ric190251 (1665 in chips)
Seat 3: Slickglen (1370 in chips)
Seat 4: golfer (3430 in chips)
Seat 5: Alkohol (1100 in chips)
Seat 6: Touch (1855 in chips)
Seat 7: Hiscoe (1290 in chips)
Seat 8: Only1init (1490 in chips)
Seat 10: Calv20061 (1300 in chips)
Slickglen: posts small blind 15
golfer: posts big blind 30
----- HOLE CARDS -----
dealt to Touch

Alkohol: folds
Touch: raises to 90
Hiscoe: folds
Only1init: calls 90
Calv20061: folds
Calv20061 sits out
Ric190251: calls 90
Slickglen: folds
golfer: folds

----- FLOP -----

Calv20061 sits back
Touch: checks
Only1init: checks
Ric190251: checks

----- TURN -----

Touch: bets 60
Only1init: calls 60
Ric190251: folds

----- RIVER -----

Touch: bets 30
Only1init: raises to 120
Touch: folds
Returned uncalled bets 90 to Only1init
Only1init: doesn't show hand
Only1init collected 495 from Main pot
----- SUMMARY -----
Total pot 495 Main pot 495 Rake 0

Here is the next hand

Game #4126253923: Hold'em NL (15/30) - 2007/05/18 - 02:30:56 (UK)
Table "2" Seat 5 is the button.
Hand History Converter

Seat 1: Ric190251 (1545 in chips)
Seat 3: Slickglen (1355 in chips)
Seat 4: golfer (3370 in chips)
Seat 5: Alkohol (2120 in chips)
Seat 6: Touch (1645 in chips)
Seat 8: Only1init (1575 in chips)
Seat 10: Calv20061 (630 in chips)
Touch: posts small blind 15
Only1init: posts big blind 30
----- HOLE CARDS -----
dealt to Touch

Calv20061: folds
Ric190251: calls 30
Slickglen: folds
golfer: folds
Alkohol: folds
Touch: calls 15
Only1init: checks

----- FLOP -----

Touch: bets 100
Only1init: calls 100
Ric190251: folds

----- TURN -----

Touch: bets 30
Only1init: calls 30

----- RIVER -----

Touch: bets 100
Only1init: raises to 420
Touch: calls 320
----- SHOW DOWN -----
Only1init: shows

Touch: mucks hand
Only1init collected 1190 from Main pot
----- SUMMARY -----
Total pot 1190 Main pot 1190 Rake 0

Originally Posted by Epic

Can you analyse my play please.
Thaqnk You

Game #4126253343: Hold'em NL (15/30) - 2007/05/18 - 02:27:12 (UK)
Table "2" Seat 1 is the button.
Hand History Converter

Seat 1: Ric190251 (1665 in chips)
Seat 3: Slickglen (1370 in chips)
Seat 4: golfer (3430 in chips)
Seat 5: Alkohol (1100 in chips)
Seat 6: Touch (1855 in chips)
Seat 7: Hiscoe (1290 in chips)
Seat 8: Only1init (1490 in chips)
Seat 10: Calv20061 (1300 in chips)
Slickglen: posts small blind 15
golfer: posts big blind 30
----- HOLE CARDS -----
dealt to Touch

Alkohol: folds
Touch: raises to 90
Hiscoe: folds
Only1init: calls 90
Calv20061: folds
Calv20061 sits out
Ric190251: calls 90
Slickglen: folds
golfer: folds

----- FLOP -----

Calv20061 sits back
Touch: checks
Only1init: checks
Ric190251: checks

----- TURN -----

Touch: bets 60
Only1init: calls 60
Ric190251: folds

----- RIVER -----

Touch: bets 30
Only1init: raises to 120
Touch: folds
Returned uncalled bets 90 to Only1init
Only1init: doesn't show hand
Only1init collected 495 from Main pot
----- SUMMARY -----
Total pot 495 Main pot 495 Rake 0

Here i'm C-betting the flop to see where i stand with these callers you got folding to any reraise/aggression. You're betting is pretty weak on the turn and river and wouldn't surprise me if someone caught that 8/9 because of those weak bets.

Originally Posted by Epic

Here is the next hand

Game #4126253923: Hold'em NL (15/30) - 2007/05/18 - 02:30:56 (UK)
Table "2" Seat 5 is the button.
Hand History Converter

Seat 1: Ric190251 (1545 in chips)
Seat 3: Slickglen (1355 in chips)
Seat 4: golfer (3370 in chips)
Seat 5: Alkohol (2120 in chips)
Seat 6: Touch (1645 in chips)
Seat 8: Only1init (1575 in chips)
Seat 10: Calv20061 (630 in chips)
Touch: posts small blind 15
Only1init: posts big blind 30
----- HOLE CARDS -----
dealt to Touch

Calv20061: folds
Ric190251: calls 30
Slickglen: folds
golfer: folds
Alkohol: folds
Touch: calls 15
Only1init: checks

----- FLOP -----

Touch: bets 100
Only1init: calls 100
Ric190251: folds

----- TURN -----

Touch: bets 30
Only1init: calls 30

----- RIVER -----

Touch: bets 100
Only1init: raises to 420
Touch: calls 320
----- SHOW DOWN -----
Only1init: shows

Touch: mucks hand
Only1init collected 1190 from Main pot
----- SUMMARY -----
Total pot 1190 Main pot 1190 Rake 0

Again, your bets are too weak here, how do you go from betting 100 on the flop to 30 on the turn?

Originally Posted by FaDi

Again, your bets are too weak here, how do you go from betting 100 on the flop to 30 on the turn?

Maybe it was a typo... because it just doesn't make sense?!

pretty sure it isn't a typo

1st hand - limp or fold. We've told you before that it's not worth creating big pots early on without huge hands i.e. QQ-AA because the tournament can't be won at the 15/30 blind level. It can however be lost!
As played, this is a great flop to represent, K rag rag. However 4 way there's a great chance that a CB isn't going to work, especially with the 2 clubs. A CB here depends on the table I think and how they perceive you. On the other hand, if you're raising PF why aren't you betting this flop?! Take a stab for about 200.
When you bet the turn you HAVE to bet it harder. People will call you with any pair and A high for 60, the bet really doesn't achieve much other than showing weakness! If you're going to bet I'd make it at least 210.

2nd hand - Fold PF. You aren't getting fantastic odds with only 1 limper and it's not worth getting involved in pots out of position without huge hands or hands that play well in multiway pots. Again, you can't win at this stage, tighten up!
As played, bet pot on the flop and about 2/3 to 3/4 pot on the turn. Your turn bet should NEVER be smaller than your flop bet (unless its a shove thats less than your flop bet).